You have lost something on a bus and called the customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: describe the item you lost explain why you weren't happy with the customer service say what action you would like the company to take.

Dear Sir or Madam, With due respect, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the customer support of lost and found enquiries. I travelled from Delhi to Gurugram in
bus
number
DL05 2134 on 15th May 2021. When I got off the
bus
, I found that my
phone
was missing which might have been left on seat
number
A21. By that time the
bus
already left. The
phone
is a One Plus 5 with a blue back cover having a picture of two pandas on it.The front screen guard is having a crack at the bottom left corner. The lock screen wallpaper has a photo of my daughter playing with our pet dog. I immediately called the customer care service after searching the
number
on the Internet. The executive was rude and reluctant to provide any support in
this
situation. He was continuously telling me to forget about the
phone
as anyone on the
bus
can take it but I believe through
modern
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tracking system it can be found. I am well aware that the chances of retrieving my mobile are low;
however
, at least we should give
a
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try to search for it on the
bus
I travelled. Can you please contact the
bus
driver who can thoroughly search the
bus
and inform me if he finds the mobile
phone
? I tried calling on my contact
number
(8822456754) and it is not switched off yet which means there is still a chance that it might be present
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the
bus
. I will be extremely thankful for your favour and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Jasmine Kaur
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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