You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution. State what problems you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service. Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.

Dear
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Baqlon, I am writing to you to complain about my recent visit to your restaurant
last
week. I invited my boss
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work for lunch at your restaurant on the 29th of April as I got very good reviews about the meatball dish you offer. We were excited to try your famous meatball dish to be surprised that what has been offered to us was totally different
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the photos we saw on your
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website
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To begin
with, the presentation was awful,the meatballs were anything but balls!
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old meat rather than fresh meat as you claim on your website. We were very unhappy with what
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, and what added salt to injury was the indifference of the employees whom we complained to.
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, we left the restaurant unhappy and completely dissatisfied with both the food and the service offered. I,
hence
, ask you for a compensation meal for two
next
week. looking forward to your response George
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