Human activities have had negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed, while other believes action can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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In today's world, due to the growing population and the increasing industrialization forest are shrinking. Some
people
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believe that
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can not be changed because humans are more important than plants and
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. Whereas, there are others who believe that some measures should be taken in
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to bring a change. In my point of view, due to the growing number of
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in the world, there is a shortage of land for them to live
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Because of
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, individuals cut
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and kill
animals
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to survive.
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, more and more
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are becoming non-vegetarian. Due to
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, there are many industries that pastor
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and
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sell their meats to the consumers.
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, in
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for us to transport materials to the
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we require roads and railway tracks. And, for the development of roads and , the track we have to cut many
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.
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not only hurts
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but
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the environment.
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, I think steps can be taken in
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to reduce the negative impacts on plants and
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.
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, we are cutting
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in
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for some kind of development we should plant double the number of
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we cut down.
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, we should provide better shelter to those wild
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.
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to
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, we should encourage
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to eat vegetarian food
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of non-vegetarian.
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will keep the ecosystem balanced and keep the environment clean and healthy. In conclusion, I think
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developments are necessary for human survival we should
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take measure to avoid impacting plant and animal life. Because plant and
animals
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are equally important for the survival of a human being.
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