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Human activities have had negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed, while other believes action can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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In today's world, due to the growing population and the increasing industrialization forest are shrinking. Some
people
 believe that
this
 can not be changed because humans are more important than plants and
animals
. Whereas, there are others who believe that some measures should be taken in
order
 to bring a change. In my point of view, due to the growing number of
people
 in the world, there is a shortage of land for them to live
.
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 Because of
this
, individuals cut
trees
 and kill
animals
 to survive.
Also
, more and more
people
 are becoming non-vegetarian. Due to
this
, there are many industries that pastor
animals
 and
then
 sell their meats to the consumers.
Moreover
, in
order
 for us to transport materials to the
destination
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 we require roads and railway tracks. And, for the development of roads and , the track we have to cut many
trees
.
This
 not only hurts
animals
 but
also
 the environment.
On the other hand
, I think steps can be taken in
order
 to reduce the negative impacts on plants and
animals
.
Firstly
, we are cutting
trees
 in
order
 for some kind of development we should plant double the number of
trees
 we cut down.
Besides
this
, we should provide better shelter to those wild
animals
.
In addition
 to
this
, we should encourage
people
 to eat vegetarian food
instead
 of non-vegetarian.
This
 will keep the ecosystem balanced and keep the environment clean and healthy. In conclusion, I think
although
 developments are necessary for human survival we should
also
 take measure to avoid impacting plant and animal life. Because plant and
animals
 are equally important for the survival of a human being.
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