You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to complain about my
credit
card
statement for
last
month. I am a loyal customer of your esteemed bank MDFC, having an account in
downtown
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branch,Toronto. I am holding a VISA gold
card
which was issued
last
year when
i
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opended
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my account.I frequently use my
credit
card
to buy items online as well
in
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shops.
Last
thursday
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, I have received my monthly
credit
card
statement and when
i
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I

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checked all my
transactions
, surprisingly I found 2
transactions
on the dates 3rd and 4th of February were not made by me. As I remember and to
best
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the best

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of my memory, I did not buy those listed items and they are very expensive too.
However
, on
same
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dates
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,dates

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there were 2 other
transactions
listed in the summary of purchases and I am clear and no discrepancy. As soon as I found them, I have blocked my
credit
card
and now I would like to ask you for
further
investigation of those
suspecious
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payments.
Also
, I wanted the statement to be reviewed and
regenarated
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regenerated

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again without these two
transactions
and until
then
, I will not pay my
credit
card
bill and hope you
also
agree with that. Yours Faithfully, Hari Sunkara

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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