Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace. With today’s technology this process is happening at a greater rate. Technology is increasingly responsible for unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Development in technology

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the replacement of workers in industries since

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1700. Nowadays,

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substitution rate is increasing fastly thanks to the progress in automation. I strongly believe that

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because there are types of jobs that can not be done by

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and many

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need personal relationships that only humans can satisfy.

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, there are a lot of works complicated which need an expert employee to be successfully complete. Despite the advancement in the high tech sector, machines are not able yet to carry out the most difficult tasks. Works like

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financial

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and

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required many abilities and

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that are too advance

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be done by

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artifical

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artificial

intelligence.

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instance, universities all over the world, especially

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Bologna's

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, are testing many

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to try to improve their abilities to perform better in different jobs but still with bad results.

Secondly

, human relations are fundamental in

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of sectors. In fact, in the hospitality

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characteristic

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one the most important factor of the businesses success. Plenty of people choose a hotel or a restaurant for the quality of service offered by workers

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instead

of a good room or amazing foods.

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, in Japan machines have substituted waiters in a wide number of restaurants but with negative results. While human employees make you feel emotions with good words and amazing stories,

robots

could not let try these experiences. To conclude, even if

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automation technology is developing fastly there are still many jobs that can not be done by

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because are too difficult or need an approach that only a human is able to do rightly.