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Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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It is suggested that
employees
 should be given at least a 4-week annual leave to
imporve
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improve
 their working efficiency. While I understand the importance of having regular breaks, I disagree that the
holiday
 should be as long as 4 weeks. On the one hand, knowing that after a long time of dedication rewarding will be awaiting,
employees
 will have
motivations
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 to work harder and put more
efforts
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 into their jobs. It can
also
 be mentally beneficial for people.
For example
,
an
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employees
 nowadays are always under tremendous pressure for they have to work overtime frequently. They spend almost all of their time on their jobs that they do not have time for their family and friends. Giving them
a
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certain days of vacation would help them balance work and life better and
therefore
 release their stress and tension. It can
hence
 be argued that providing
employees
holiday
 is beneficial.
On the other hand
, a 4-week
holiday
 is too long for the company that it may affect the normal operation of the company, and even the whole society.
For instance
,
the
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modern society is moving so fast that every
second
 a new idea could be launched. Employers are competing with one another on a timely basis. With the position being vacant for a minimum of one month will
definetely
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definitely
 be harmful
for
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 the productivity and efficiency of the
coroption
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corruption
.
Moreover
, it may
also
 arise contradictions between colleagues. If the team members have to cover tasks left by the person who is on
long
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 vacation, it will increase the already heavy workloads of these members and result in low efficiency. In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential pro blems of giving long
holiday
 to
employees
 are more significant than the possible benefits.
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