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Band 7

You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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letter
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 to bring to your kind attention that
last
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 week I did receive a
letter
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 from the
bank
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. The
letter
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 stated that I should confirm
confirm
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the receipt of the new
bank
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card
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 which was sent along with the
letter
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.
However
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, upon checking the envelope, I realised that the new
bank
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card
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 was missing from it. I am extremely disappointed and concerned regarding
this
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 missing
card
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. You must be aware that there are a lot of frauds
which
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 take place and these fraudsters are always on the
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lookout
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look out
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lookout
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 for stolen or lost cards. I am worried that if my
card
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 falls
in to
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 the wrong hands, there would be a possibility of them misusing it. I am not very comfortable with using cash as a mode of payment and rely
soley
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solely
 on the
bank
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card
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 for making purchases or buying groceries. I guess I'd just have to wait till the
bank
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 sends me a new
card
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. Upon receiving my
letter
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, I'd like the
bank
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 to come up with an explanation regarding the whereabouts of my
card
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 within a fortnight.
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, if possible I'd like the
bank
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 to come up with a process to avoid
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further
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 lapses. Yours Sincerely, Sameer Karve

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