You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter

to bring to your kind attention that

last

week I did receive a

letter

from the

bank

. The

letter

stated that I should confirm

confirm

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the receipt of the new

bank

card

which was sent along with the

letter

However

, upon checking the envelope, I realised that the new

bank

card

was missing from it. I am extremely disappointed and concerned regarding

this

missing

card

. You must be aware that there are a lot of frauds

which

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that

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take place and these fraudsters are always on the

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lookout

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look out

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lookout

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for stolen or lost cards. I am worried that if my

card

falls

in to

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into

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the wrong hands, there would be a possibility of them misusing it. I am not very comfortable with using cash as a mode of payment and rely

soley

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solely

on the

bank

card

for making purchases or buying groceries. I guess I'd just have to wait till the

bank

sends me a new

card

. Upon receiving my

letter

, I'd like the

bank

to come up with an explanation regarding the whereabouts of my

card

within a fortnight.

Also

, if possible I'd like the

bank

to come up with a process to avoid

such

further

lapses. Yours Sincerely, Sameer Karve

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3Word repetition
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6 paragraphs

208 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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