More and more women go out to work. Is it the government’s responsibility to subsidize them and provide free staff and facilities to care for their children?
As an underage woman living in a government, if I was asked about
this
question, my answer would be yes. Women
’s labor
force rises day by day. Not only do they provide income to make a living, but Change the spelling
labour
also
they increase national income. I will clarify my thoughts about this
statement in this
essay.
First
and foremost, so as to provide an income of a house, woman’s labor
is necessary for me. Even if there is a man who makes tons of money in a house, the woman should Change the spelling
labour
also
work
for her economical independence regardless of the fact that she should take care of her child. To supply this
condition, governments or companies where women
work
should provide free staff and facilities for the children. For instance
, big gym companies like mac, provide children a
playground to spend their time and take care of them during their mothers are on shift.
On the side of the argument, some people hold the opinion that Add the preposition
with a
women
should stay at home and take care of the children. The ones who think in this
way are generalşly men and women
convinced by men. It's everyone's right to have economical independence and live freely. On the other hand
, various drawbacks may be noted. The countries where women
don’t work
are undeveloped and unable to reach a certain level of well-being. For example
in Bulgaria which participated the European Countries as the last
country, women
's labor
is way higher than our country, and the government Change the spelling
labour
supply
Fix the agreement mistake
supplies
women
free staff and facilities to help them economically and physically
To sum up, as an independent individual living in the twenty-first
century, I’m totally saying yes and agreeing with the statement above. If everyone's equal, then
governments must provide every condition to women
to make them work
and peacefully gain their money.Submitted by haticecoza on
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