Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that these activities are not good for a child's mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is popularly believed that watching a lot of

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and playing video

games

leads to a worrying trend of children's mental health.

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has become a cause for concern

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since it affects

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the child

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child

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and

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the future of humanity. In my opinion, I completely agree with

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ellaborate

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the main

consequnces

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consequences

of spending a lot of

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TV or

games

. To start with, the youngers who spend almost all of the day playing video

games

or with

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are less social and

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not many friends.

This

trend could be caused by a number of reasons,

such

as the lack of

time

for friends, isolation from family, and wasting all the

time

on

games

and television. These activities can result in a number of problems in future

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when

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child

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will need to socialize and make new meets for study or job.

In addition

, these activities take a long

time

and

chilren

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children

pay no attention to books, self-education and study. Another important consequence is

agression

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aggression

by children. It is a well-known fact, that video

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has led to anger and violence. What I mean by that, some of these ones include scenes of violence, murder and war what affects the mental health of youngers. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the effects of TV and

games

are too detrimental to overlook. The

governmnet

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government

should stop

this

trend by control of content for children and

development

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of good activities

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such

as

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libraries

,

sport

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sections and cultural events.