You have lost something on a bus and called customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: • describe the item you lost • explain why you weren't happy with the customer service • say what action you would like the company to take.

Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your notice that
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Tuesday, I lost my mobile
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the bus run by your agency. I tried reaching out to the customer service department;
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, I am extremely disappointed with their lackadaisical response.
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Tuesday, while I was on my way to Whitefield from Indiranagar in bus 5C245, I, unfortunately, dropped my mobile while being seated at the back. I only realised about it after I deboarded, but, by
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, the bus had gone too far, and I could not chase it down.
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, I immediately contacted the helpline number and informed them about the incident. I was told that I would get a call back once they recover my phone. Despite
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, I am yet to hear back from them, and I am still waiting for the
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4 days. I feel
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is unprofessional on their part. I am entitled to get an update on the same from the customer service department. I would like you to follow up with them and make sure that I receive an update by tomorrow.
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, in case the mobile is recovered, do let me know the exact location from where I ought to collect it. I await your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Abhinav

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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