Nowdays people make new friends throught social network and internet chat groups. some people think this is good. Others think that face to face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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With the development of modern technologies, the internet is advancing at an amazing speed. One of the factors for

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is the social media channels availability. Nowadays, it absorbs all the free time of

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entertaining activities

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as new acquaintances, keeping up with friends, various discussion club portals etc. In

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I will discuss the pros and cons of internet-made friends. On one hand, in the age of change,

people

are welcoming cutting-edge technologies warmly. They shorten the distance, ensure connection via different channels plus it is not costly at all. To start a conversation with a stranger is not a big deal and often

people

feel more confident while making the

first

step to start a conversation. Everyone is free to express his/her opinion unanimously whereas in public you cannot go incognito. I remember my friend George who wanted to marry a girl but could not take any step forward towards his beloved one. I advised him to keep in touch with that girl via Facebook. After a while, George thanked me and talked about their

first

date.

On the other hand

, face to face conversations with

people

is crucial. The person wearing a mask and pretending to be someone different can be easily recognized. Connections made in real life are more trustworthy and long-lasting.

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, if fake

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can be easily deleted and blocked from your contact list in social media without any serious consequences, in the real world it may have grave traumas

such

as panic, stress, insomnia etc. As an example, I have experienced huge disappointment when I realized I am cheated with my friend. I have lost my faith in humanity for a long time and was struggled a lot while trying to overcome the bad experience I had with him. To sum

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virtual reality is not that terrifying that it seems. Friendship can start in virtual reality and

then

can easily be transferred into the real world.

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Nowdays people make new friends throught social network and internet chat groups. some people think this is good. Others think that face to face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to anaudience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People should be atleast 21 years old before they are allowed to drive a car. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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