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the data gives information about educational fares between six different regions and it is divided into females versus males in four years, from 2000 up until 2004.

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Overall, there is a considerable amount of educated people around the world, where
males
 share outnumber the
females
 one in total and in each continent separately.
In addition
, three out of six continents surpass
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a significant proportion of the worlds average literacy rate, the same ones where the proportion of literate
males
 is almost equal
as
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females
one
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. in general, it is clear that the average of scholarly people in the world is quite high with 82.2% of the total population attending schools. Educated
males
 surpass knowledge
females
 by almost ten per cent, 87.2% and 77.3% respectively. While Europe has the highest rate of literate people with a surprising 98.8% of the total population, a similar situation is noticed in
Americas
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 and Oceania
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 more than 90% has attended studies; both these continents present almost the same amount of educated inhabitants, approximately 93.5%. In these three
continents
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 it is appreciated an almost equal quantity of
males
 and
females
 who audit on a class.
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