Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that these activities are not good for a child’s mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that the overall criminal age in the world is rapidly reducing in the

last

few decades, which is assumed by many people as the consequence of

violence

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movie

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movies

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and

video

games

.

Therefore

, there is an argument stating that parents should restraint the usage time of their children for these

activities

since they have negative effects on a child’s mental health.

However

,

this

essay will provide reasons to refute the aforementioned statement on playing

video

games

and watching television of young people. Many youngsters nowadays are suffering

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educational pressure from both their parents and teachers, which might make them feel overloaded and breakdown.

Therefore

, entertaining through television shows and computer

games

can help them to release daily stress and improve their productivity.

Additionally

, after a hard-working day, teenagers tend to look for

video

games

as a method of

put

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their

mind

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minds

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off reality, making a step back from their issues,

thus

make a better

judment

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judgment

judgement

call on their problems.

Moreover

, despite the social stigma for

video

games

, they can actually help children to have better social skills. Since many game

genre

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nowadays

require

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contact and teamwork between players, juveniles can sharpen both collaborative and communicating skills through these

activities

.

For instance

, forcing adolescence into social

activities

neither help them to have more confidence about themselves nor make them feel more comfortable around people, especially for introvert type,

however

, by allowing them to interact willingly with others through their favourite

activities

, there is a higher chance that they can fully develop themselves compared to the other option. In essence, the notion that playing

video

games

and watching television

are

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not good for an

adolescence’s

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mental health is something that I strongly disagree

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And as long as children are educated with proper

behaviors

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, these

activities

cannot influence them into the criminal path