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Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Others think that face-to-face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #friends #networks #internet #chat #groups #interaction
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contemporary
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 era,
people
 are making new
friends
by
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through
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 the internet. Some individuals hold the opinion that
,
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this
 is
good
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a good
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 thing, while others are
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opposite
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to
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it
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.
Although
,
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network
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the network
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 connects
people
 at long distance, I believe that
,
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face
 to
face
 meeting is much better.
To begin
 with,
people
who
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claim that, it is good to connect
to
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through social media because it is
time
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 saving and cheaper method.
People
 do not need to
commuting
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 to meet their
friends
 and relatives. If they travel, it will not only
time consuming
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, but
also
 increases
expenditure
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the expenditure
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of
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on
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coffe
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coffee
 and fuel.
Moreover
,
lot
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 of applications are available, one can easily find
a
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apply
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new
friends
 and can spend with them by chatting.
In addition
 to
this
, it connects
people
 in different parts of the world,
people
 can communicate with
friends
 who
living
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 in other countries. On the opposite side and according to me,
face
 to
face
meeting
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meetings
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strengthen
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strengthens
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 the bond of
relationship
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a relationship
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. It develops trustworthy relationships which
is
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are
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 not possible by
network
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the network
a network
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.
Also
, physical
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an
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and
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 interaction reduces mental stress because
people
 can easily share their problems with others.
Furthermore
,
people
 are making
fake
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fakes
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 id's to chat with
people
, so one cannot identify that he or she is loyal
for
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to
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 them, whom they are talking to about their problems. Even many
people
 faced trouble because of their online
friends
,
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 because they deceive them. To conclude, while the network offers
people
 to stay in touch with
friends
 and make new
friends
, I believe that
face
 to
face
 communication
build
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builds
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 trustworthy relationships between
people
.
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