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the pie chart shows the review of 100 customers of the Parkway Hotel by 100 guests in years 2005 and 2010. The service was five times better in 2010. In the

year

2005, 45% of the customers were satisfied with the service, whereas only 17

percentage

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of customers were happy in the

year

2010. The guest results were approximately5 times for good service.

However

Both the poor and the very poor result was improved in the

year

2010. It was 36 per cent in 2005 which came down to only 16 %. Overall the customer satisfaction was much higher in the

year

2010 when compared to 2005.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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