The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: - A brief introduction of yourself - Your experience and relevant skills - Why you want the job Write 150 words only.

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Dear sir/madam,

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is James Austin and I have done my graduation in political science. I am writing to inform you that I have seen an advertisement published in the local paper that your school is seeking applicants for a job over summer break and I will be glad if I am given

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opportunity . Basically, I have already done job-related to the library in the Mount Litera Zee School and I am

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having one year of experience.

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, I could perform all the tasks in the library independently.

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, I am pursuing my masters through the distance learning program so a part-time job like

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won’t put an extra burden on my studies.

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, with

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income I will be able to manage my basic expenses.

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, if I am given

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opportunity I will be a valuable asset to your institution. Awaiting a favourable response from your side. Yours faithfully, Jagjit.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: - A brief introduction of yourself - Your experience and relevant skills - Why you want the job Write 150 words only.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What measures do you think might be effective?

Advertisements are the most important marketing startegy to enhance the sale of products ? Do you agree or disagree?

Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them.

What impact does the tool have on planning and policy-making for future governments?