you have won first prize in our competition . The prize is a meal for two at the best restaurants in town. your evening begins at 7:00p.m when we will send a car to collect you and your guest. you will driven to the four Seasons restaurant and served with the delicious three course meal. write a letter in which you: Describe your evening and whyb you enjoyed it (or didn't enjoy it) comment on the quality of the meal and the service at theDear

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Dear Sir/Maam, Greetings, I am writing

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letter, to let you know that I am happy that I won the

first

prize in your competition. I am exquisite to inform you how my experience with the dinner meal you provided as my prize. To start with the very nice driver who picked us, anyways I brought my best friend with me as my guest to enjoy the meal for two. As he dropped us in a four-season restaurant, which is the best restaurant in town, we are welcomed and assisted well by the waiter. Let me explain how excited we're as soon as they put our appetizer on the table, it is

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of chips, a slice of quesadillas and served with creamy mushroom soup. We are almost full as we finished it but as they served the main course which is a tenderloin steak, we dug in again. It is so tasty and the server told us that it was their most favourite meal in town. Don't forget the meltdown chocolate brownie for dessert that completed our meal for that night. That was the best dinner I ever had, which you let me experienced without paying anything. I really enjoyed the night and I am delighted to all staff in the restaurant who accommodated us well. Thank you for letting me and my friend have

this

evening and maybe soon, I'll join again in your competition and hopefully win again. Yours truly, Tokyo Madrid

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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