you have won first prize in our competition . The prize is a meal for two at the best restaurants in town. your evening begins at 7:00p.m when we will send a car to collect you and your guest. you will driven to the four Seasons restaurant and served with the delicious three course meal. write a letter in which you: Describe your evening and whyb you enjoyed it (or didn't enjoy it) comment on the quality of the meal and the service at theDear

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Dear Sir/Maam, Greetings, I am writing

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letter, to let you know that I am happy that I won the

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prize in your competition. I am exquisite to inform you how my experience with the dinner meal you provided as my prize. To start with the very nice driver who picked us, anyways I brought my best friend with me as my guest to enjoy the meal for two. As he dropped us in a four-season restaurant, which is the best restaurant in town, we are welcomed and assisted well by the waiter. Let me explain how excited we're as soon as they put our appetizer on the table, it is

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of chips, a slice of quesadillas and served with creamy mushroom soup. We are almost full as we finished it but as they served the main course which is a tenderloin steak, we dug in again. It is so tasty and the server told us that it was their most favourite meal in town. Don't forget the meltdown chocolate brownie for dessert that completed our meal for that night. That was the best dinner I ever had, which you let me experienced without paying anything. I really enjoyed the night and I am delighted to all staff in the restaurant who accommodated us well. Thank you for letting me and my friend have

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evening and maybe soon, I'll join again in your competition and hopefully win again. Yours truly, Tokyo Madrid

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

245 words

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

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In some cities, public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?