The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit?

The changes in payment methods have become more
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convenient
after the introduction of cashless payments.As
,
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Money
has become the major part of living. As we spent most of the
money
in terms of
cash
, as we don't get introduced to
credit
card
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cards
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at
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our
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early life. I would rather
pefer
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prefer
paper
money
over plastic payments will be defined in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with,
cash
is more comfortable
to
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the
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people who don't have
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lifestyle. As,
cash
is more
feasibe
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feasible
to finance and
also
lack
of
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knowledge
towards
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the usage of
credit
cards
, most of them would rather prefer
paper
money
over
credit
cards
.
Furthermore
,
Paper
money
is accepted almost all over the world. To cite an example of my personal
expirience
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experience
, when I was in
my
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first
year of my university, I used to carry
credit
or debit
cards
along with me
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inorder
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in order
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to
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pay
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ay
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pay
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my bills and other expenses, due to which I used to run out of
cash
at month
ending
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. I have discussed the same problem with my parents they suggested
me
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to
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withdraw
cash
and asked
to
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me to
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save some
money
.
This
idea helped me to save the
cash
at the time of
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.
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plastic
money
, especially
credit
cards
has
lot
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many problems related to timely
repaymet
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repayment
repayments
and annoying calls from
banking
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sector people.
Also
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older generation
peolpe
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people
and children could not be able to know the
usgae
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usage
use
and payment through these
cards
.
However
,
on
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thing
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the thing
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which cashless payments
is
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to be appreciated is they reduce
usage
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of
paper
and always keep the
money
pocket lighter
instead
of carrying much
cash
a single
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does its business. To conclude, owing to the
advantagesin
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advantages in
advantages
my
prespective
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perspective
,
such
as helping in saving
money
and wide acceptance, I obviously believe that
use
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the use
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of
paper
money
is superior.
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