The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit?
The changes in payment methods have become more
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after the introduction of cashless payments.AsCorrect your spelling
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Money
has become the major part of living. As we spent most of the money
in terms of cash
, as we don't get introduced to credit
card
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at
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our
early life. I would rather Change the word
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prefer
paper
money
over plastic payments will be defined in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, cash
is more comfortable to
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the
people who don't have Correct article usage
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urban
lifestyle. As, Add an article
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cash
is more feasibe
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feasible
also
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towards
the usage of Change preposition
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credit
cards
, most of them would rather prefer paper
money
over credit
cards
. Furthermore
, Paper
money
is accepted almost all over the world. To cite an example of my personal expirience
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my
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first
year of my university, I used to carry credit
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pay
ay
my bills and other expenses, due to which I used to run out of Correct your spelling
pay
cash
at month ending
. I have discussed the same problem with my parents they suggested Change the form of the verb
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cash
and asked to
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money
. This
idea helped me to save the cash
at the time of month end
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Whereas
money
, especially credit
cards
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sector people. Correct article usage
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cards
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thing
which cashless payments Add an article
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the usage
paper
and always keep the money
pocket lighter instead
of carrying much cash
a single cards
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the use
paper
money
is superior.Submitted by shailjameel2410 on
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