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You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

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Dear Manager, I am writing
this
 letter to bring your attention to the quality of food we had
last
 Saturday. We are seven members of
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 group and every Saturday we gather at your restaurant for our casual business meeting. Since it is less crowded and with great ambience, we can discuss our business agenda there with my team. A couple of my colleagues have ordered your signature dish on Saturday as per your crew's recommendation.
However
, the chicken was not cooked well and it was really chewy.
Eventhough
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Even though
 we asked for the replacement, the alternated dish was not
upto
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up to
 the taste as we used to
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. It is not just the taste but
quality
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 was diminished and the
staf
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staff
were
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 not willing to give us compensation for the same. We have been coming to your place for a year now and
this
 is how you treated your regular customer? I hope you personally look into the matter and ask your chef and crew members to give
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services in an adequate manner. Appreciate your consideration. Thank you. Yours faithfully,
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal
 Desai
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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