Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 % female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree?

Nowadays, females consist

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half workforce of companies, especially in developed countries.

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,

less

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management careers are available for

women

.

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of

women

as managers is the main point that should be considered. In my opinion, people living in the world must have the same

prospect

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to be appointed without the importance of gender. In today’s world,

women

are working beside

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men

, so they have the ability to solve big problems and

also

behave exactly as the

men

in head positions do. They have had striking achievements in various fields,

such

as education,

researches

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, art, engineering or even military. If more of the private or public sectors decide to recruit females in their managerial groups,

women

will be encouraged to follow their goals.

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they will notice that there are some situations for them to become successful.

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plays an active role in

a

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human life.

For instance

, working in performing part or as an astronaut are known as very hard jobs but

Nasa

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have always been paying attention to both

women

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and

men

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capabilities. There are famous

women

that

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have important duties in

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teamwork.

On the other hand

, assigning a certain percentage to

women

is not professional and still makes them feel disappointed.

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they wonder if they could have more share. It would be a very nice idea if it expressed

about

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the equality of

male

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males

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and

female

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females

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. Based on recent studies. there is no difference in brain operation. Each person has two parts of mental and physical abilities in order to create, study, do

sport

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activities, and

also

play music.

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shouldn’t be any specific opportunity for either

men

or

women

,

therefore

every one try for what they want to deserve.

For example

, there are some countries that have had the best role in controlling the spread of

Covid-19

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,

such

as New

Zeeland

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Zealand

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, and Germany. Their minister of health is a female.

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they are successful because of their behavior and power. In conclusion, it should be considered to let male and females express their

idea

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and show their power

with

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having the chance to be in high-level and making decision positions.