Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 % female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree?
Nowadays, females consist
the
half workforce of companies, especially in developed countries. Change preposition
of the
Despite
, Correct pronoun usage
Despite this
less
management careers are available for Change the quantifier
fewer
women
. Use synonyms
Recruitment
of Correct article usage
The recruitment
women
as managers is the main point that should be considered. In my opinion, people living in the world must have the same Use synonyms
prospect
to be appointed without the importance of gender. In today’s world, Fix the agreement mistake
prospects
women
are working beside Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
men
, so they have the ability to solve big problems and Use synonyms
also
behave exactly as the Linking Words
men
in head positions do. They have had striking achievements in various fields, Use synonyms
such
as education, Linking Words
researches
, art, engineering or even military. If more of the private or public sectors decide to recruit females in their managerial groups, Fix the agreement mistake
research
women
will be encouraged to follow their goals. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Also
they will notice that there are some situations for them to become successful. Add a comma
Also,
This
plays an active role in Linking Words
a
human life. Remove the article
apply
For instance
, working in performing part or as an astronaut are known as very hard jobs but Linking Words
Nasa
have always been paying attention to both Correct your spelling
NASA
Use synonyms
women
and Change noun form
women's
Use synonyms
men
capabilities. There are famous Change noun form
men's
women
Use synonyms
that
have important duties in Correct pronoun usage
who
Nasa
teamwork. Correct your spelling
NASA
On the other hand
, assigning a certain percentage to Linking Words
women
is not professional and still makes them feel disappointed. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Also
they wonder if they could have more share. It would be a very nice idea if it expressed Add a comma
Also,
about
the equality of Change preposition
apply
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
. Based on recent studies. there is no difference in brain operation. Each person has two parts of mental and physical abilities in order to create, study, do Fix the agreement mistake
females
sport
activities, and Change the noun form
sports
also
play music. Linking Words
It
shouldn’t be any specific opportunity for either Correct pronoun usage
There
men
or Use synonyms
women
, Use synonyms
therefore
every one try for what they want to deserve. Linking Words
For example
, there are some countries that have had the best role in controlling the spread of Linking Words
Covid-19
, Correct your spelling
COVID-19
such
as New Linking Words
Zeeland
, and Germany. Their minister of health is a female. Correct your spelling
Zealand
Actually
they are successful because of their behavior and power. In conclusion, it should be considered to let male and females express their Add a comma
Actually,
idea
and show their power Fix the agreement mistake
ideas
with
having the chance to be in high-level and making decision positions.Change preposition
by
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion