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The length of vacation that employees enjoy each year varies from job to job. Do you think people should have the same number of holidays regardless of their occupation? Explain your answer.

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The matter of whether or not different jobs should have the same length of
vacation
 brings great concern to the public. In
this
 article, I will discuss the reasons why I can’t entirely agree with
this
 view. It is undeniable that giving
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 of holidays to different jobs will make some people feel unfair. On the one hand, some types of
work
 cannot be given
vacation
 like ordinary
work
. Specifically, public service professions
such
 as doctors, firefighters, and transportation employees require people to
work
 7/24. My aunt's experience serves as a typical example. She and her husband are both railway station staff. They have not celebrated the Spring Festival together in 6 years. She told me that the best situation is to have the opportunity to eat a takeaway together when the train meets. These basic service staffs provide us with convenience, just like a candle burning itself to give us light.
On the other hand
, some
work
 is so hard that these employees must take more rest time. Movie cameraman can be taken as an example. It is normal for them to
work
 15 hours a day, so many people choose
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to
 take a week off after a week of
work
. I think it will be dangerous for them if they do not have enough
vacation
 after these kinds of works. To sum up, I think the length of the
vacation
 should be decided according to the specific situation of the
work
.
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