In school or universities, girls prefer subjects related to art and boys prefer subjects related science. Should this tendency be changed? What is your opinion?

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There is a dominant trend in society that has led the younger generation to opt

different

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subject

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subjects

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. It is perceived that girls

wants

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to take subjects related to arts and boys prefer

science related

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subjects.

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essay will examine

this

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issue and will present

logical

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conclusion.

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with, many people

beleives

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believes

that girls should

work

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in the art

sector

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and

male

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males

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should

work

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in inventing

sector

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, there are more boys in the

field

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homescience

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home science

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apply

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or doing courses in hotel management in which they are taught how to deal with customers and how to

work

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kitchen

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a kitchen

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where they can create new

receipes

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recipes

. There

many

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famous chefs in the

field

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such

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as Gordon Ramsey,

Sanjev

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Sanjeev

Kapoor, which has made

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sector

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more male

dominanted

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dominated

. They have broken the trend that males only belong to

the

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science related

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work

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, their female counterparts have been working in the

techonology

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technology

sector

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where they have earned various awards like Nobel prize,

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Medals etc.

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, Jennifer Doudna

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won the Nobel Prize in the year

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2020 for their

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in chemistry. Even though

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the proportion of ladies in

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the field

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field

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fields

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phiysics

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physics

and chemistry is less, but

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is just

begining

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beginning

and more & more are taking

interests

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in it. The tendency of having education and interests divided based on sex needs to be eradicated

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I would like to say that there are many boys and girls who are breaking

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trend and have initiated to take part in various subjects.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

256 words

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In school or universities, girls prefer subjects related to art and boys prefer subjects related science. Should this tendency be changed? What is your opinion?

Your opinion

Some people believe that money spent on space research benefits all humanity. Others take the opposite view and say that money for this type of research is wasted. Discuss these 2 opinions / positions

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