You recently visited a store and did not like the customer service there. Write a letter to the store manager and say: 1) What was the issue there? 2) Why wasn't the staff helpful? 3)Suggest what can be done about it?

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to complain to you about you staff members who were very unfair and rude to me when I visited your store
last
Sunday. My name is Prabhjot Kaur, a resident of house number 21, Kamal Park, Aman Nagar, Jalandhar. When I came to know that a new supermarket in our area
then
I decided to visit with my family. When we reached
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the mall
then
we were over the moon and we picked up the shopping cart and started moving here and there to search for items. We saw a room
heater
. We liked
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lot and put it in our cart. There was an attractive discount offer on that
heater
. After that, we came to the billing section. There was a long queue and we were waiting for our turn. Actually, we were very thirsty and wanted to drink water. So, we told the person behind us to look after our trolley and within 5 minutes when we came back we found our
heater
was not in the trolley. We were so worried at that time and we found one man who picked my thing and had already got it billed in his name. We complained to your salesman who knew that we had picked
first
but he sided with the other person. We could not understand the logic, but ad the
heater
had already been billed, we could not do anything. We were very upset that we could not purchase anything. You have video surveillance so I request you to go through their footage and you will come to know that we gave been wronged. Please admonish your staff, or you will never build a good relation with customers. Hoping to hear from you regarding
this
matter. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, Prabhjot Kaur
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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