You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website. Write an email to the relevant person in admissions at the college, asking them to clarify these points for you. In this email, Say what your interest is Explain why the website is unclear Request the information that you need Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’

#college #course #cost #duration #subjects #website #email #person #admissions #points #interest #request #information #‘dear

Dear Mr Anderson, I am writing to you seeking information about the new course on Basics of Cryptocurrency, starting

month. I am a 3rd-year student of Bachelors in Finance. I believe that participating in

such

courses will only increase my knowledge spectrum and can

also

help me to get a job.

Furthermore

this

crypto topic is talk of the town nowadays and many people are still unaware of the basic concepts. It is mentioned on the college website that the registrations for the event have already started.

However

, the information about the deadlines of enrollments, duration of program and fee details are still unclear.

Additionally

, the website has mentioned only cryptocurrency and nothing about blockchain technology. I need more information about the timelines and the fees, and if I can pay fees in instalments. I would be grateful to you if you can send all the details over email which will help me to decide whether to pursue

this

opportunity or not. I look forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Mark Morgan

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