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The diagrams below show life cycle of the silk and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summerise the information by selecting and reportinh the main features

The diagrams below show life cycle of the silk and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summerise the information by selecting and reportinh the main features
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The given diagrams illustrate the period of the
silkworm
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silkworm's
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 life
also
 there are some steps which involve in producing
silk
 cloth
Overall
,there are 4 stages which build cycles from
eggs
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the eggs
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 period to
cocoon
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the cocoon
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 cycle,
as well as
 it can be seen that the process of preparing
silk
 cloth from boiling to weaving First of all,eggs are produced by moths.after ten days,they convert to silkworm
larva
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larvae
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 and
they
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apply
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are fed by mulberry
leaf
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leaves
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. 4_6 weeks take long to appear
silk
 thread by the larva.
finally
,after a period of about 3_8 days, the
cocoon
 was created by
larva
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the larva
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.16 days after producing
cocoon
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a cocoon
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,it again turns
to
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into
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moth
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a moth
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 and a new cycle will be started.
Regarding
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To
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to
Remove the preposition
apply
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production of
silk
 cloth,
it
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apply
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 starts with
a
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apply
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boiling the
cocoon
 in
the
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apply
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water.after which,
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the thread
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thread
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threads
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 are separated in unwind stage and their length is getting wider between 300_900
m.thread
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thread
 can be twisted,
dyed
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and dyed
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.
finally
,it is weaved and now it is totally ready.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words silk, cocoon with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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