Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.do you agree or disagree
It
is believe
thatChange the verb form
is believed
,
more wages Remove the comma
apply
is
beneficial than Change the verb form
are
job
fulfilment. I will disagree with Use synonyms
this
statement because working pleasure is necessary for more achievement and increase productivity.
To commence with Linking Words
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first
view, working pleasure is very important to make ourselves happy. To explicate it,working in Change the article
the first
good
environment makes more comfortable. It will help to achieve goals. Correct article usage
a good
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satunder
Correct your spelling
sat under
sartaaj
was Correct your spelling
Sartaj
PHD
in English but his interest in singing Correct your spelling
PhD
aftertahat
, he left his teaching Correct your spelling
after that
job
and join Use synonyms
singing
profession which leads to Add an article
a singing
make
more fame and name. Change the verb form
making
Nowdays
, he Correct the word
Nowadays
bocome
one of the top Correct your spelling
become
singer
in Change to a plural noun
singers
world
. Add an article
the world
Thus
, money does not matter than Linking Words
job
satisfaction. In the other words, Use synonyms
job
Use synonyms
grtioalso
helps to increase productivity. To explain it , Correct your spelling
grit also
job
what you doing keeps you Use synonyms
motivate
and career growth. There is Wrong verb form
motivated
Correct your spelling
strong
stronv
relationship between Correct article usage
a stronv
job
satisfaction and productivity. People who like their Use synonyms
job
can easily excel in Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
field
feild
of Correct pronoun usage
their feild
workand
achieve better results than those who like to do Correct your spelling
work and
Use synonyms
job
for more money. Correct article usage
a job
For instance
, dr henry left Linking Words
hus
teaching Correct your spelling
his
job
and join community health services because he Use synonyms
live
to give services to cancer patient .he feel calm when he helps Replace the word
lives
to
needy people . Change preposition
apply
Hence
he is awarded as Linking Words
padam
Change the capitalization
Padam
shri
award by Change the capitalization
Shri
president
of Add an article
the president
india
. In the end , with interest Change the capitalization
India
perform
any take give you more success . Wrong verb form
performing
To
conclusion, Change preposition
In
big
salary is more important than Correct article usage
a big
job
Use synonyms
satisfication
is not Correct your spelling
satisfaction
good
thing . Add an article
a good
Job
gratification is better than more pay which makes you happy and Use synonyms
perform
your task easy and get more success.Change the verb form
performs
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite