Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like, and ask them how much the weekend will cost. Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to you regarding

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the reservation at your hotel. I have been decided to book a room in your hotel for my holiday, I need a room on the 15th Dec 2021 and 16th Dec 2021, I will be checking out on the 17th Dec 2021. I would like to book a deluxe room with a king bed, or queen bed, it is depending on the price. I

perfer

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to have a spa in my bathroom, a couch and a tv

must have

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Also

, if possible including a nice view balcony

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will be great, because I love to

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some fresh air when I wake up in the morning, maybe I could enjoy a cup of tea

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the balcony too. Could you please give me a better deal for staying over the weekend, which I know now is the quiet season in your city

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Furthemore

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Furthermore

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there are any famous places close by to your hotel, as I love to do some outwork or even just go for a walk in the evening.

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, a big shopping centre or a cinema will fit my need too. Hopefully, you could give me a good price for the

acommondation

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accommodation

and some nice place that

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could visit. I look forward to

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from you. Thank you Your

secerely

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securely

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

233 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Arrangements
Check-in/Check-out
Double room/Suite/Family room
Amenities
Rates
Reservation
Cancellation policy
Leisure activities
Attractions
Cuisine
Allergen-friendly
Excursions
Itinerary
Accessibility features
Anticipate
Assistance
Confirm
Enquire

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Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like, and ask them how much the weekend will cost. Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.

The Closing

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