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Nowadays people make new friends through social network and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Others think that a face to face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #friends #network #internet #chat #groups #face #interaction
In recent times the
use
 of social networking
sites
 and various internet chat groups is increasing to make new
friends
. Few
people
 think that
this
 is a good thing
while
 others oppose
to
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this
 idea and believe in
face to
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face-to-face
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face
 interactions.
This
 essay will discuss both
the
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sides of the issue but in my
opinion
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opinion,
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 I think
face
-to-
face
 interactions with
people
 is necessary to make
friend
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a friend
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.
Now-a-days
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Nowadays
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 many social networking
sites
 like Facebook, Whatsapp, Messenger, etc have emerged.
People
use
 these
sites
 to make new
friends
 and connect with
peoples
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people
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 from across the globe.
This
 has helped us to share our thoughts and ideas
to
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with
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 everyone irrespective of the geographical area they are from. With the help of
sites
 like LinkedIn,
people
 increase their professional networking which helps them to boost their careers. With the help of
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the internet
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internet
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internet,
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people
 try to share their experiences and feelings
to
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with
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 others which can act as an inspiration or guide for their online
friends
. With constantly evolving technology,
people
 are getting closer and closer to each other without actually being in their physical presence. In a recent study by Oxford, it was found that around 85%
youth
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of youth
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 in England
has
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have
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 a digital presence on multiple social networking
sites
On the other hand
, some
people
 still think that to make
friendship
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friends
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 with someone
face
-to-
face
interaction
 is necessary. A
face to
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face-to-face
show examples
face
interaction
 with a person helps us judge and understand them much better
that
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than
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 an online
interaction
. The personal bonding with
people
 who have regular
face to
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face-to-face
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face
 interactions is much higher.
Also
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 the biggest concern
now-a-days
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nowadays
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 is of
people
 using fake information and accounts on social networking
sites
. Many
people
use
a
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apply
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fake
account
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accounts
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 on social media to befriend someone else and to exploit them
of
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for
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 various things. In a report published by Maharashtra Police Cyber Cell around 30%
people
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of people
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use
 social networking
sites
 under false information.
This
 essay discussed about increasing trend
about
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of
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people
 using social networking
sites
 to make new
friends
 and debated about whether it is right or wrong.
As per
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In
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 my
opinion
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opinion,
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 I think a
face
 to
face
interaction
 is essential to make
friends
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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