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Interview forms the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However, some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. To what extent do you agree?

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The interview
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 is the most common form of hiring people in
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companies.It is believed by many people that there are some other ways to select employees rather than
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 selection method.I believe that hiring people by having
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 to
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conversation
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 is the most reliable option.
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, Companies and businesses are busy
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doing a lot of other stuff and even recruitment
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procedures
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 in big companies is
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 so having
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 conversation in the form of giving
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interview
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an interview
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 is the best possible option as in
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 way you get to know
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person
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the person
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 in detail and the background.
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, Hiring Procedure is based on steps so you don't just give
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an interview
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 to one
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 but there is a loop of HR and management that you go through to get to
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 process.In
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way
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 they are able to know your full profile.
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, Screening the
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background
 history is
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 a good option where recruiters can know how authentic information is provided by the candidate. To conclude,
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 there are many alternative ways to hire a
person
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but
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in my opinion
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Interview
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an Interview
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 is the best one as it gives
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 opportunity to meet in
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the same
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 time have
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a better
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 understanding.
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