the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The bar chart illustrates the value of one country’s exports in several categories during 2015 and 2016. The table,

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, demonstrates the percentage of changes in each group of transport in 2016 in comparison to 2015. In general, the

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impression from the bar chart is that petroleum products exports in 2015 were the highest and textile and agricultural sales were the lowest. Each category;

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, according to the bar chart as well as the table, experienced a rise except gems and jewellery transport.

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with, in both 2015 and 2016 the most amount of exports was related to petroleum products. By way of illustration, in 2015, it was approximately 60 billion dollars which saw an increase of 3% in 2016. The

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place,

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, regarding earning money was for engineered goods which were nearly 57 billion dollars and rose by 8.5% in 2016. Gems and jewellery sales

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the only category that declined by 5.18% in 2016. Agricultural products,

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, had a slight growth which was only 0.81%.

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but not least, textiles’ sales underwent an explosion and grew by 15.24%.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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