The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Gender

equality

is a right that both

of

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male

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males

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and

female

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females

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can enjoy the same position in policy, economy, and society. The past 50 years have seen changes

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women

’s position in many societies.

However

,

gender

equality

still has not been achieved completely. I

similarly

believe

this

and my reasons are twofold. In previous centuries,

women

were not allowed to have their

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in the patriarchal society until an awareness of feminism appeared came out.

However

, most

women

still worry about quitting or losing their jobs when they are married and pregnant.  Undoubtedly, companies

also

consider

this

kind of uncertainty, so they will prefer to hire men than

women

, especially in a high position.

This

is the reason why

women

can work in a good company but they always have obstacles in front of their promotion.

Women

can have their own

career

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and be commercial independent. In the mid-20th century, the movement of the

second

wave feminism,

women

argue that they should be allowed the same rights, power and opportunities as men. So far, there are many companies

which

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provide almost the same career opportunities for

women

. Even though there is a complete system for maternity leave,

women

absolutely take their child and family as the

first

priority.

Furthermore

,

women

are always responsible for housekeeping and play a vital role in raising children. If

gender

equality

is achieved, husband and wife should share their housework and spend quality time with their children in a

fair way

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. The truth is that even though

women

are in a double-income family, wives always take more housework than husbands. Overall, without a doubt,

women

can almost enjoy the same rights as men now.

However

, humans still need to work hard to implement complete

gender

equality

.