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You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear,... You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

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Dear Mr Jones, I am writing
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 letter with regard to express my
dissatifaction
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dissatisfaction
 with the meal and
service
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 of your restaurant. Our team,
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, The Interior Design Members, always arrange our meetings every Thursday at your food joint "The Fern Foodies". We generally order a grilled sandwich with french fries and wedges along with a cup of hot expresso for each member of our organisation. Usually, the
food
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service
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 offered is very satisfactory but
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 week we were disappointed with the meal and the
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.
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 of all, the bread and the potatoes were stale and we could see the black fungi spots present on them.
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, I asked the waiter to exchange the meal and get fresh ones; but, to my surprise, he brought the same meal again. Most of our members refused to eat the sandwich and we had to end our session abruptly due
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 constant disturbance caused by the
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 department. Our group
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 are now rethinking whether or not to continue our meetings at your restaurant. Even though
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 the
service
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 and meal were not
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up to
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 the mark, I could suggest you
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ensure that you personally take
incharge
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in charge
 during our get-together session so that the ingredients used are fresh and the staff offers proper
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. I hope that you will consider my suggestion! Your's sincerely, Davi Jones
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