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The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy consumption of the UK in two years

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy consumption of the UK in two years
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The given pie charts illustrate the consumption of
energy
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 from various sources in the UK in the year 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is clear from the charts that coal and
gas
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 were the main two sources of
energy
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,
while
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 solar and other kinds of fuel were the least amount of
energy
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 consumed over the period shown in the pie charts. In 2000, it is noticeable that the proportion of
energy
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 usage from coal was the highest of all categories at 30.0%, followed by
gas
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 and petrol, with the figure being 29.5% and 29.0% respectively. The rest was shared on solar at 6.5% and other types of
energy
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 at 5.0%. In 2010, it is apparent that there was a gradual increase in the consumption of coal,
gas
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, solar and other
energy
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 in the UK. The use of coal was responsible for 31.0%, come after by 30.0% of
gas
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, 10.0% of solar and 9.0% of other
energy
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.
In contrast
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, the use of petrol had decreased to 20.0%.
To conclude
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, there was a slight change in the proportion of
energy
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 consumption in the UK over a 10-year period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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