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Interview form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However, some people think that an interview is not a realiable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Interview
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 considered as
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 of the most important
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 for the selection of an
employee
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 as with the help of the
interview
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 we can get to know more about the ability of the employees and even the
employee
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 can ask more about the company as many people believe that
interview
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 is not a
relaiable
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reliable
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 should take an alternative option for the selection of the
employee
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 there are many reasons why we should take
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interview
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an interview
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 at the time of hiring the
employee
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 as with the help of the mock
interview
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one
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 can get to know more about the personality and the potential of the person it is considered that face to face interaction
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 more beneficial as the candidates have to answer impromptus questions through which
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 can easily get to judge the ability of the candidate whether he/ she might work under pressure or not and can co-operate with the terms of the company
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although
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 there are many other methods of conducting interviews
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 as written methods or theoretical knowledge
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it is considered that the written test
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 not more reliable as compared to mock
test
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 as in the written test the chances of cheating and
frauds
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 are higher as the interviewer can take the help from the outsiders another process is group discussion from which we can appoint the
employee
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 as at that time the interviewee can get to know more about the communication skills of the interviewer as the communication skills
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 a vital role in the sales job In
conclusion
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 we considered
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interview
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an interview
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 is the correct way to appoint an
employee
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 through which even the morale and the
self confidence
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 of the employer
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 increases and he/she can enhance its skills as per the requirements of the job or the company.

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