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CATERING STAFF WANTED Are you free weekends from 20th June to 5th September? We need staff to serve food at events including family celebrations & business dinners. Previous experience desirable but not essential. Apply at: [email protected] Write an email applying for the job (170-200 words).

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing with regards to the advertisement for catering staff to serve food at events which appeared in The Bridgetown Herald on Thursday. I am interested in applying for
this
 position. I am 19 years old and have just taken 2 C levels* in English and Maths. I am currently studying
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Business Administration at Sofia University "St. Kliment Ohridski" and I expect to get high grades. Over the past two
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 I have worked as a waitress in a luxury restaurant in the
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. I found it enjoyable.
Although
 it was tiring I was dealing with the tension and the customers were placed. I consider myself to be hard-working, patient and reliable. I
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 enjoy working as part of a busy team, and I am able to work well with others. I would be very grateful if you consider my application. I have attached a copy of my CV and
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 from my previous employer. I am available for an interview on weekday mornings only. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Gabriela Aleksandrova
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