In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

It is a common belief that using

cameras

in public places is being rose could restrict

people

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freedom

.

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, there is a more persuasive argument that these changes have had an overall positive effect because they can reduce

crime

in the community. On the one hand,

cameras

now appear in most

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public

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the public

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places in cities, even rural areas.

This

is concerned that the

freedom

right of individuals can be

infriginged

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infringed

,

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people uncomfortable when they are in public places.

For

instance

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in China, authorities

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cameras

to

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score

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in

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inhabitants, which

is make

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freedom

rights

being

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infringred

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infringed

strongly.

Government

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also

can abuse it to

controled

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controlled

control

freedom

campain

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campaign

from people, which is usually harmful to the rulers.

Nervertheless

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,

government

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the government

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uses

cameras

as a tool so

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control

the

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criminal

acitivities

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activities

easier. High terrorist and

crime

rate threatened the safety of the public and using

cameras

help police follow the

crime

easier. According to a

reccent

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recent

survey in Hanoi, the

crime

rate decreased thirty

percent

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in two years because the authorities

has

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using

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cameras

to follow the public

acitivities

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activities

.

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could

led

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the

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society to

a

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upper level

that

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criminal does not exist. To sum up, while there are some disadvantages of

to

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using

cameras

to

monitoring

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citizen

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, it is evident that the advantages of these things far outweigh the drawbacks.