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The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is a common belief that
cash
are
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 more
convenience
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 than
credit
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a credit
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card
 because
people
 are familiar with those for a very long time.
However
, I firmly believe that
credit
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a credit
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card
 is better than
cash
 because it has more
features
, which is really useful for
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the consumer
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consumer
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consumers
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. On the one hand,
paper
money
are
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is
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 easy to use for all
of
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people
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the people
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. The invention of
paper
money
 has
change
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changed
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 the world for
hundred
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hundreds
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 of years. It has a long history
about
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of
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cash
 and
people
 are using it can
pay
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play
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almost
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for almost
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 everything from dairy products to cars or even properties.
Cash
also
 can be stored easily as long as
their
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its
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 owner has facilities. According to a
reccent
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recent
 survey in Vietnam, with the question that what kind of exchange method that easiest, 75
percent
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per cent
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 of responders answer that they chose
paper
money
. It demonstrates how important
of
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cash
in
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is in
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 our lives.
Nevertheless
, I support the idea that
credit
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card
 is a better exchange method than
cash
becasue
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because
 it has more
features
. A
credit
card
 has a variety of functions
such
 as
withdraw
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withdrawing
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money
 at
ATM
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an ATM
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 and paying
internet
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for internet
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 transactions.
In addition
,
credit
card
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cards
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 are more slightly and
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thinner
thiner
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thinner
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 than traditional
money
,
this
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which
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 makes
credit
card
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cards
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 easier to bring them everywhere. These
features
helps
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help
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people
 using
credit
card
 feel more
satisfation
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satisfaction
 than
the
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apply
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money
paper
. A study in the US has
show
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shown
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 that 90
percent
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per cent
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 of
people
 using
credit
card
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cards
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 feel they are more
convenience
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convenient
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 than
the
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apply
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traditional
cash
.
Credit
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A credit
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card
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cards
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 in some cases
,
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apply
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are
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is
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 the thing that
showing
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shows
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 the
wealthy
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wealth
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 of the owner, the rich are
alo
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also
all
 have a tendency to
using
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use
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credit
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a credit
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card
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cards
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 more than the poor. To sum up, while it is apparent that
paper
money
 has more familiar and easier to use for individuals, it is undeniable that
credit
card
 has more
features
 and
much
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are much
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 better than
cash
.
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