You have seen an adverstisement for weekend work in a hotel in the town where you are staying. You have worked in a hotel before and think that the job would be suitable for you. You must apply in writing. Write a letter to the hotel manager expressing your interest. In your letter . Introduce yourself . Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job . ask what work you would be expected to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter with reference to the advertisement for the weekend position at your hotel which has been recently published in Toronto Star on 8th April 2022 and I would like to express my interest in that career. I am Rajalakshmi Rengasamy currently pursuing a Master's Degree in Hotel Management at the University of Toronto in the town ,

therefore

a weekend job is suitable for me. I desired to bring your knowledge that I

also

had related work experience for 6 months as Front Office Manager during my

last

summer vacation. I find myself capable of

this

profession as I have acquired the required abilities and skills through my undergraduate degree in Hospitality Management.

In addition

this

, I am a very courteous , sincere and customer service oriented person to ensure that the guests are leaving the Hotel premises with happy and enthusiastic faces. I

also

request you to furnish more details about the exposure of

this

role.

Firstly

, I would like to know the duties that I have to perform during my assignment.

Secondly

, I would like to know the nature of work, working culture and timings if any, and any other related information. I

also

attached my curriculum vitae along with

this

letter for your understanding and looking forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully, Rajalakshmi Rengasamy

Submitted by Rajalakshmi on Mon Apr 11 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

227 words

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