You have seen an adverstisement for weekend work in a hotel in the town where you are staying. You have worked in a hotel before and think that the job would be suitable for you. You must apply in writing. Write a letter to the hotel manager expressing your interest. In your letter . Introduce yourself . Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job . ask what work you would be expected to do

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Dear Mr John I am writing to express my interest in the recent weekend job opportunity in your

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, where I happened to be residing presently. My name is Victor, I am 40 years old and from New York City, where I work as the manager at the famous Transcrop Hilton

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, But I am currently on vacation in Florida and I have been staying at the Palms

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here for the

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three days. I was previously the receptionist at the Transcrop

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for 10 years, where I attended to over an average of 50 customers on a daily basis in the 200 bedroom 5-star

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my ability to lead got me promoted to a managerial position.

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of these experiences, I believe that I am best qualified for

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short term role you advertised.

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, since I am already at the

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, it will be an easy transition. I am aware that different hotels operate differently, so I would like to kindly find out if exactly is expected of me in terms of my job description.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

181 words

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