You want to book a hotel recommended to you for a family holiday at the seaside. Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangements. • explain what accommodation you require and when you want to stay • ask what will be included in the price • enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir I am writing with regard to booking at your hotel rerecommended to me by one of my close friends for my coming family holidays and I would get some information before making a reservation. As I am planning to visit with my family for the

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long weekend holidays, I would like to book a large family room with extra beds that can comfortably accommodate us.

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I know about some basic information as I got them from my friend, I would appreciate it if you could tell me details of the services

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as the internet service or breakfast.

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, I want to know about the activities that we can take part in during our stay for more fun and adventure. I would

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like to enquire if there are any places of interest or markets nearby where we can explore more about the local culture. I would forward to receiving your mail with information that I enquire about the hotel. Yours faithfully, Sandar Myint

sandarmyint740Sat Apr 23 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

169 words

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