You want to book a hotel recommended to you for a family holiday at the seaside. Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangements. • explain what accommodation you require and when you want to stay • ask what will be included in the price • enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir I am writing with regard to booking at your hotel rerecommended to me by one of my close friends for my coming family holidays and I would get some information before making a reservation. As I am planning to visit with my family for the

long weekend holidays, I would like to book a large family room with extra beds that can comfortably accommodate us.

Moreover

although

I know about some basic information as I got them from my friend, I would appreciate it if you could tell me details of the services

such

as the internet service or breakfast.

Furthermore

, I want to know about the activities that we can take part in during our stay for more fun and adventure. I would

also

like to enquire if there are any places of interest or markets nearby where we can explore more about the local culture. I would forward to receiving your mail with information that I enquire about the hotel. Yours faithfully, Sandar Myint

Submitted by sandarmyint740 on Sat Apr 23 2022

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