During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. He suggested you should contact him for a possible job opportunity. Write a letter to remind him about meeting and your interest in a job and why you think you are suitable

Dear Mr. Walter Assi,
This
is Mehdi, I met you
in
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to Toronto flight, and we talked about one of your restaurants which
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some gays for
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, and you told me that you are hiring for there. you suggested me a position in your restaurant. Given that, I studied Marketing
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university, and I have more than 5
years’
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experience in
this
field, so, I hope that I would be fit and helpful for
this
position. I have a marketing plan for
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restaurant and catering service which if you hear about, you would be excited
.
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I have never proposed it to anyone. I am interested
to work
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as an executive in charge of Marketing, and I can increase your
annul
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income. I have some bright ideas that would be helpful for your business. Since
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I have worked
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the
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catering services and
I
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have researched
on
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that, I think that I know
this
business properly. So, I
could
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be suitable for
this
job. *My CV is attached to
this
email. Thank
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this
opportunity Mahdi Sohrabi
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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