In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical skills. in the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, having experience and
skills
is playing an increasingly important role in getting recruited. It is said that these qualifications will have a far more vital
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than academic achievements in future. I am convinced that there will be many fields where only practical abilities will count, whereas in others theoretical qualifications will remain critical. Practical
skills
are quite critical for executing occupations and learning them does not requires formal
educations
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in many fields
any more
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. Ones can take the example of careers like interior designers who need the ability
of working
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with different programs like Cads to design plans.
Although
those programs used to be taught at
universities
, there are many online resources that provide useful educational courses that not only can they learn
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without going to
universities
but
also
they can be taught better by using videos which educate them
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by step.
Therefore
, people can be trained to do jobs and improve the required practical
skills
even without learning them theoretically at
schools
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. Despite the above, theoretical lessons have been viewed as the fundamentals of many occupations.
This
is because those fields do not have that many practical tasks to be executed.
For instance
, doctors diagnose disease by comparing the symptoms they memorized for an illness
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the patient's signs.
Thus
, people can say that taking
universities'
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courses will remain essential to do specific types of jobs. To sum up, having practical qualifications is not enough for all occupations. I believe depends on the job. Even though the available educational resources have made it possible to gain practical
skills
and execute more practical careers, like architecture, properly without having academic licences, for being a doctor or the jobs involved with theoretical lessons people still need to attend
universities
in future.
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