You are planning a trip for you and a group of friends to a resort in a foreinn country. Write a letter to the manager of the resort requesting more information. Your letter should include When you hope to be staying at the resort Ask for suggestions on activities to do Ask for advice on places to eat for both vegetarian and family friendly places
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Dear Sirs and/or Madams,
Firstly
, I am writing to inform you that a group of my friends are planning to stay at your resort next
month. There will be a total of 10 of us including 8 adults and 2 children. We have never been to your resort before so we have questions regarding our stay. I hope you could accommodate 4 sea view rooms for three nites.
Secondly
, we are excited and full of energy as we are quite young. Where during our stay we want to challenge ourselves by getting involved in some outdoor water activities. We also
are interested in some fun sporty events on the beach. We would greatly appreciate it if you could recommend some ideas that could be of interest to us.
Finally
, just to let you know all the adults are vegetarians and two children are only 3 and 5 years old wanting to go to bed early in the evening. Therefore
, we need a restaurant with a plant-based diet and also
that has a family food menu. We wonder if you know of any places that are close by.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Viet PhamSubmitted by viet.phamtan on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite