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Some workers work for the same organization whole their life while others think it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#workers #work #organization #life #organizations
In my opinion, It is better to work in
same
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organisation
 for
long
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time
. Only if they are
recieving
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receiving
payrise
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pay rise
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 and bonuses in certain intervals, like
anually
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annually
manually
 or at
certain
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 period of
time
. So they will be achieving something from the
organisation
 and they will get the seniority as the
time
 flews.
Also
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 they will get promotions considering the fact that their seniority, work performance,
time
 management, etc. The person can have a large amount of
Graduity
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Gratuity
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 while retiring.
On the other hand
, Working in different organisations will gain a different experience
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 different people . those organisations will be a new place for you and will get more income based on your quality,
experience
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. I feel that the drawback is that , you will be a newbie to
the
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co-workers.
Also
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this
 will affect the amount of
graduity
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gratuity
 when relieving. Both have advantages. if one
organisation
 is not good, I mean have
delay
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 in salary or working for low salary means if they are not paying according to your qualification and experience and dedication , It is better to go for another
organisation
 which will value you. so for me , if you are paying well and have all the benefits
anually
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annually
 and the
organisation
 is respecting you as well ,
then
 you should work under the same
organisation
 for your lifetime.
otherwise
 change the
organisation
 until you are satisfied.
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