Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources such as wind and solar power. Other say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

In these modern times, one of the biggest

challenge

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sociaties

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societies

are facing is climate change. While some individuals believe that seizing the usage of fossil

fuel

is the solution to mitigate

this

problem,

other

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others

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believe that economy will

seriously

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effects

with

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such

action. I am of the view that

usage

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the usage

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of alternative

energy

source

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instead

of fossil oil is the best option to preserve

environment

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the environment

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.

Firstly

,

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sine

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since

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the industrial revolution in the

1980's

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, the world face dramatically increase in

the

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climate temperature.

This

is mainly because

the

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massive consumption of fossil fuels which led the scientists to correlate the percentage of

fuel

consumption with the temperature elevation

the

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that

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led to serious matters

such

as ice melting in the northern frozen pole.

Hence

, as long as industries

continue

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use fuels as

only

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the only

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source of

energy

, the world will face global warming sooner.

In addition

,

usage

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the usage

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of fossil

fuel

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fuels

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will

cause

air pollution that sometimes could be irreversible.

This

in turn will

cause

the carbon footprint

increase

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in the environment.

For example

, the farming machines and cars that depend on

fuel

will

accummulate

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accumulate

and

cause

air erosion.

Thus

,

inhabitant

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inhabitants

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will not have enough fresh breathable air in the city.

Finally

, the merit of using wind and solar power as

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a source

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source

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of

energy

has been proven by

histry

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history

. People in the past used to depend on manual work away from machines.

Although

life used to be difficult without the help of machines,

however

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they granted a healthy lifestyle and

an

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energy

been preserved. In conclusion, in the

last

decades, climate change has become a critical problem for the environment.

Although

some people

perioritize

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prioritize

economic issues that might

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affect

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effect

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affect

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when we stop

consume

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consuming

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fuel

as

energy

, I think

this

trend may

cause

more dangerous consequences in the near future.