You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – Describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

#hotel #receptionist #manager

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Sir, Greetings of the day! I am writing

this

letter to share my experience when I stayed at your hotel New Era on the 23rd of

last

month and I had faced a serious issue regarding

check in

Add a hyphen

check-in

show examples

services. At the onset, I

have

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

booked my room from the Goibibo website for two days with an early check-in option;

however

, on

check-in

Add an article

the check-in

show examples

date, 23rd of

last

month, there was no record of my arrival in your system and

receptionist

Correct article usage

the receptionist

show examples

told me one more issue of internet connectivity error. I was so disappointed due to

such

service by your renowned hotel which was never anticipated by me. I was so tired from my train journey and I had to wait for more than two hours in the waiting area. But, honestly,

Ms.

Change the punctuation

show examples

Reva, your receptionist of C1 helped me a lot as she rang up the online booking site and entered my data manually in the logbook by taking my booking number, ID proof and other declaration certifications from me.

In addition

, she assisted me to fill three essential papers so as to decrease my botheration.

Lastly

, I would like to suggest you

Remove the particle

apply

show examples

have one more backup internet plan so that customers will not face

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

identical issues again.

Moreover

, if it is possible to appoint a person to deal with online booking customers and their problems to communicate directly to these websites, it will certainly increase the efficiency of your services and goodwill among customers. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours faithfully, Harry

Submitted by Mrjit147 on Thu May 19 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

254 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5.5
band
In some countries, owning a home is more important rather than renting one. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It is a belived by people in some countries that it is more essential to have a house of your own than to live in a rented house,owing to their cultural belief. However, it could pose challenges to the young generation as buying a property nowadays is increasing in difficulties due to the rise in population, and it will also affect the environment negatively.
5
band
Write about the following topic. Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In present time, plenty of children lead a unlealthy life. Some children stay up to study or play video game. Others would rather watch whatever television or video in their room than going out and doing sport. However, Those difficulties which face children are not only children’s problem themself, but also parents and schools have to address these issues. From my perspective, I am completely in favor of that parents and schools should be involved in the concern for children’s unhealthy existence.
4.5
band
In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
According to the population of digital reading way, someone view that there will be without people to buy printed newspaper or books in that they will be ought to read everything they want on the Internet on free. From my perspective, I would argue that the printed newspaper or books will not be abandoned no matter when.
6
band
Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smart phone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, people tend to use their smartphones in almost their leisure time. There are some causes of this development and I strongly believe that people use technology devices in most of their free time is a negative evolution.
7.5
band
You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university Write a letter to the international counsellor at the university In your letter ❑ explain which course you are interested in ❑ tell what you know about the university ❑ state why you should receive the scholarship Begin with
I am writing to express my interest in the scholarship program offered by the university.

You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – Describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

In some countries, owning a home is more important rather than renting one. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smart phone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?