More and more people are working from home rather than at the workforce. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, we are facing the covid-19 pandemic in the world. Because of the coronavirus
pandemic
every country Add a comma
,pandemic
also
implemented a strict lockdown, additionally
it caused the shutdown of all the companies, schools, institutions and research centres. Right now many companies and research institutions allow workers to job from Add a comma
,additionally
home
where some communities happily accept doing jobs from home
and others’s not. I think some public like that because they will have time for family, Moreover
they can work in different part-time jobs with other companies and earn more money. On the other, hand employees who Add a comma
,Moreover
doesn’t
prefer to work from Change the verb form
don’t
home
might be facing problems like mental and family issues. At the moment much
new young age employees pursue additional courses online. For, Correct quantifier usage
many
the
example they are learning other activities and teaching the students through online classes. It has allowed employees to do jobs at any time or watch television and chill with friends. Correct article usage
apply
As a result
, a person feels comfortable and becomes more concentrated on his responsibilities. In conclusion, however
arguments above in support of each opinion, we can see there are many advantages and disadvantages of being employed from home
and I want to say that it must be decided by everybody which way of employment to choose.Submitted by nagendranp1991 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite