The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The illustration given below depicts the proportion of water utilization for multiple purposes in six parts of the world.
Domestic use of aqua in
Europe
,North and South America
is lowest
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the lowest
while
, the consumption of
in Change preposition
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Africa
,Central Asia
and South East Asia
in terms of agricultural use has the highest utilization.
First of all, Industrial usage in both North America
and Europe
is almost similar that is
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half 48% in North Change preposition
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America
yet just over half 50% in Europe
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is 53% Correct pronoun usage
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while
it drops to 40% in South America
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Furthermore
, domestic utilization in North and South America
collectively in
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is
than
20% exact figures are 13% in North Change preposition
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America
and 19% in South America
.Moreover
, just 15% water
is consumed in Change preposition
of water
Europe
.
Secondly
,a larger proportion of aqua is almost above than
80% and it is consumed for the sake of agricultural usage in three regions of the world including Change preposition
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Africa
,Central and South East Asia
.Apart from that,tiny
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Africa
and Central Asia
.These figures are 7% in Africa
and 5% in Central Asia
but it is almost double to Africa
in East Asia
exactly 12%. Apparently, the proportion of domestic consumption is showing a similarity precisely
7% in Central and South East Change preposition
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Asia
while
9% in Africa
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