explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my high criticism about
last
night which attended to your restaurant for my husband's birthday party. I am one of your constant clients and use to hang out in your place several times a week and I was always cheerful about your services till
last
night when a high level of disorganization happened.
However
, I had reserved the place from a week ago for a seven-seat table but when we arrived pieces of stuff just asked me to wait for more than an hour in order to arrange a suitable place for us.
furthermore
, when the meal has arrived,I recognized the quality of your foods has reduced too. The ingredients were not fresh and my daughter's plate was not clean. so I ask you to take a strike action about
this
problem than has been started in your cafe recently.
otherwise
, you would lose your permanent clients. I hope you would consider my request and take action promptly. your's faithfully m.Dehbashi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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