Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree?

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employees are female in several advanced countries, the high majority of

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roles in businesses

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by men.

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that a particular proposition of these positions should be allocated to

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because women usually outperform men in university courses and equality is a basic right

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them. The main reason why

companies

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ought to assign a specific percentage of these positions to

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is to achieve equality. It is unfair to fill these high-level

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with more men when women are the majority of the employees. Since both

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mainly have the same work competence when it comes to job productivity. In Saudi Arabia,

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is by forcing employers to maintain an equal

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of both girls and boys. Another reason

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argument is that

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mostly do better academically than males. Human resources in many

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new workforce regarding their high grades and experience so

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it is unreasonable to fill these executive-level positions with

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base rather than expertise as

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commonly have better academic performance.

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, girls students in Saudi Arabia pharmacy

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a significant high grades

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in most subjects

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five years. In conclusion, top

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vacancy should be filled with a specified percentage of both gender in order to obtain the

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right by equity

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and to acknowledge their academic performance as girls have higher grades